Forsaken Stars Issue Five, Page 6
With the pared down visuals, it was my hope that I would be able to update more frequently. Life has had other plans. I will do my best to remedy that in the coming weeks!
In the meantime, I’d love to hear your thoughts on this exchange between Fabius and Machiavell. Can anyone tell me where Machiavell was last seen? Was it issue 1, 2, 3 or 4?
UPDATE: Eagle-Eyed Mr. Cook of Mansion of E fame spotted my Kryptonite–the dreaded your/you’re swap. Despite being fully aware of their differences, and going over the script and word balloon dialogue several times over before uploading, sometimes these little bastards still escape my notice! As much as it irks me to be wrong or let errors get by, I welcome correction. I mean, if I have mustard on my chin, I would hope someone would point it out so I can wipe it off, right? So thanks again, Robert! And more importantly, thanks for reading!
Watch for my other favorite flubs: their/there/they’re, its/it’s and who’s/whose or who/whom coming to a page near you!